Back and forth
...............................Falling fast
.............................................Again I fly
.............................................Feet scraping ground
..................................Rope goes slack
...............Air rushes behind
Forth and back
6 comments:
miss sunshine!!!
your poem be fine
you inspire me
to be a somebody
not just a shadow
forgotten in the hollows
but someone outspoken
who refuses to be broken
a free spirit
shouting my opinions for all to hear it
unashamed
you gave me that name
and like that girl on the swing
your freedom has caught me smiling
never touching the ground
Only laughter surrounds
the swingers in the sky
you taught me how to swing so high
I feel as though you've given me wings
And that would have been fulfilling
But you didn't stop there
All of you, you began to share
Now, I can fly on my own
just the way you've shown
you gave this gift to me
And I will never forget my shot at a destiny
free from my past chains
I am no longer in pain
:D ok yeah so IT SUX AND IT"S CHEEZY! but i got my point across... :D and yes...yes... WOW! that 1 pic sparked all that... well.. yes and now you know just how much I miss you!
love ya sis ;P
and thank you :D
nicely written hannah. You conveyed a lot of emotion, I could hear your voice in that (which may have been because I miss you so much). Keep at writing, Hannah. You'll do well. :)
I love you and can't wait to see you on Tuesday!!!!
Simple, happy, and lovely
Thanks for your comment on my blog. =)
let's go to the park again. :)
Keep working ,great job!
Hi thr, thanhxd a lot for this blog ....... This was exactly what I wwsa looking fro.
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